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DevelopmentbycomparisonandcontrastBygroup1
Whenwecompareonethingwithanother,weshowthesimilarities;whenwecontrastonethingwithanotherweshowdissimilarities.Thatisthedifferencebetweencomparisonandcontrast.
Sample1Whysomanygraduatesgravitateintobusinessinsteadofintoteaching?Partofthereasonistheeverwideningpaygapbetweenthesetwoprofessions,asecretary,anofficeclerkorabankemployeecanearnmonthlyincomeashighasRMB2,000,andwhenoneispromotedtothepositionofabusinessexecutiveormanger,thesalaryisevenhigher;butacollegegraduatewithmasterdegreecanonlygetsalaryofRMB1,000permonthforhisteachingjob.Nowonder,collegegraduatesareattractedintomorelucrativefields.
Sample1Thethemeofthisparagraphiswhysomanygraduateschoosetodobusiness.Thisparagraphusesthemethodofcontrasttoexplainthatbecauseofthewideningsalarygapsomanystudentspreferdoingbusinesstoteaching
Sample2Theheartofanelectroniccomputerliesinitsvaccumtubesortransistors.Itselectroniccircuitsworkthousandtimesfasterthanthenicercellsinthehumanbrain.Aproblemthatmighttakeahumanbeingalongtimetosolvecanbesolvedbyacomputerinoneminute.
Sample2Inthisparagraph,inordertoemphasisethespeedofcomputerisfast,theauthormakeacontrastbetweenhumanbrainandcomputer.
Sample3Therewasaboyinlovewithapond,richinsunnyhoursandsummerdays.Sunandsummerarestillwhattheyalwayswere,buttheboyandthepondchanged.Theboy,whoisnowaman,nolongerfindmuchtimeforidledrifting.Thepondhasbeenannexedbyagreatcity.Theswampswhereheronsoncehuntedarenowdrainedandfilledwithhouses.Thebaywherewaterliliesquietlyfloatedisnowaharborformotorboats.Inshort,everythingthattheboylovednolongerexists----exceptintheman"smemoryofit.annex[‘aneks]并吞swamp[swamp]沼泽;湿地
Sample3Inthisparagraph,theauthorcontraststhesurroundingswhichthemanlivesinwiththatwherethemanlivedwhenhewasaboy.Ittalksaboutthepond,theswamps,thebay.Theparagraphdescribesthebeautifulscenerywhenthemanwasaboyandthecitywhichthemanlivesnowbyusingthemethodofcontrast,thisparagraphletsusseethechangeoftheboy"slivingsurroundings,andshowstheman"scherishingofhishappychildhoodlife.
Justastherearedistinctdifferencesbetweenbeingasmallfishisabigpondandabigfishinasmallpond,soitiswithworkingasasubordinateinalargeenterpriseandpresidinginasmallfirm.Withtheformer,youcanderiveadeepsenseofsatisfactionfrombeingamemberofawell-knownorganization.Youhavetheopportunitiesoflearningfromexperiencedexecutivesandknowingaboutthestandardworkingprocess.Withthelatter,youhavegreaterresponsibilitiesandyourdecisionsmaybringimmediateeffect.Normallyyouareexposedtovariousexperiencesandexpectedtodoagreatmanythingwithoutmuchhelporguidance.
Sample4Thisparagraphoutthedifferencebetweenbeingasmallfishinabigpondandabigfishinasmallpond.Eachtworeasonsaregiventoillustrateeachother`sbenefits.Usingthemethodofthecontrast,thisparagraphmakesusseethedifferencesimmediatelyandobviously.
Therearetwowaysofpresentingsimilaritiesordissimilarities:Blockpresentation(subject-by-subjectpattern)Alternatingpresentation(thepoint-by-pointpattern)
Youshouldconsiderdevelopingyourparagraphbycomparisonandcontrastwhenyouaredescribingtwoormorethings,whichhavesomething,butnoteverything,incommon.Youmaychoosetocompareeitherpointbypoint(Xisbig,Yislittle;XandYarebothpurple.)orsubjectbysubject(Xisbigandpurple;Yissmallandpurple.).Consider,forexample,thefollowingparagraph:
Althoughtheinterpretationoftrafficsignalsmayseemhighlystandardized,closeobservationrevealsregionalvariationsacrossthiscountry,distinguishingtheEastCoastfromMidwestandtheWestCoastassurelyasdominantdialectsorpoliticalinclinations.InWashington,aflashingredtrafficlightinstructsdriverstocareenevenmorewildlythroughintersectionsheavilypopulatedwithpedestriansandoncomingvehicles.Instartlingcontrast,anamberlightinChicagowarnsdriverstoscreamtoahaltontheoffchancethattheremightbeapedestrianwithin500meterswhomightconsidercrossingatsomeunspecifiedtimewithinthecurrentday.InmyhometowninMontana,finally,trafficlights(alongwithpaintedlinesandpostedspeedlimits)donotapplytotractors,allterrainvehicles,orpickuptrucks,whichtogetheraccountformostvehiclesontheroad.Infact,wereanyobservantAmericandroppedfromanalienspacevesselatanunspecifiedintersectionanywhereinthisvastland,heorshecouldalmostcertainlyorienthim-or-herselfaccordingtothesurroundingtrafficpatterns.
ThisparagraphcomparestrafficpatternsinthreeareasoftheUnitedStates.ItcontraststhebehaviorofdriversinWashington,D.C.,inChicagoandinMontana,inordertomakeapointabouthowattitudesinvariousplacesinformbehavior.Peopleintheseareashaveincommonthefactthattheyalldrive;incontrast,theydrivedifferentlyaccordingtotheareainwhichtheylive.Itisimportanttonotethattheparagraphaboveconsidersonlyoneaspectofdriving(behaviorattrafficlights).Ifyouwantedtoconsidertwoormoreaspects,youwouldprobablyneedmorethanoneparagraph.
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